My film sequence

I have finished my film sequence and have uploaded it onto youtube but it won't let me inbed it at the moment so I am trying to load it onto blogger itself. :)

Voice Over problems.

I added the voice overs into the sequence and I like the way the first one works after getting rid of as much background noise from the recording as possible. I have added some of the titles to the sequence and will add a few more to make it appear more complete. The second voice over doesn't work as well as it sounds too fragmented so I am going to re-write it so that it can fit the space I want it to ocupy. It will sound better as a continous speech witht he music on quietly in the background instead of a few seconds of speech then another few later. This will hopefully make the sequence sound a lot better and then I will be pretty much finished. :)

Trouble with V.O

The voice overs that I recored didn't work very well and a lot of them wouldn't play so I have had to re-film the voice overs but they are now on my timeline and ready to be edited into place. I have put on section together which involves music being turned down for the voice to be heard and I am going to look inot how to make that a smoother transition so that it sounds right instead of messy which it is at the moment. I then need to cut the speach into the sections it is said in and edit it into the timeline to make sense. Once I have done this all I will need to do is add the titles to the sequence to make it look like the opening of a movie as it is intended to look.

I've done both of my voice overs and just need to edit them into my sequence. Once I have finished that I need to add the titles to the title sequence and then I should be finished with my film clip.
This is the script for the second voice over which happens during the title sequence;
'The new song by the Horrorpops blasted through my car radio as I raced past yellow cabs on the journey from Queens to Manhattan. The light was leaving the city sky, turning the river beneath me black. Even in the dark the colours of New York city shine through. I was heading to my office with trouble on my tail and the scoop of the century in my hands. All I had to do was deliver it.'
This will be split up inot sentences and will interact with what is happening in the sequence.